Lee Duna to [email protected]English • 2 years agoRevealed: car industry was warned keyless vehicles vulnerable to theft a decade agowww.theguardian.comexternal-linkmessage-square55fedilinkarrow-up1543arrow-down114cross-posted to: [email protected]
arrow-up1529arrow-down1external-linkRevealed: car industry was warned keyless vehicles vulnerable to theft a decade agowww.theguardian.comLee Duna to [email protected]English • 2 years agomessage-square55fedilinkcross-posted to: [email protected]
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilinkEnglish-7•2 years agoJust a writing tip: separate your points into distinct sections. Your point makes sense, but reads better when broken up into distinct paragraphs or thoughts.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilinkEnglish6•2 years agoIt’s already separated into two paragraphs, separating both points I’m making.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilinkEnglish-3•2 years agoCertainly is after your edits. Thanks.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilinkEnglish1•edit-22 years ago… I didn’t split it in two as an edit, it was split from the get go… Edit: I looked again and the only difference is that I added “proportionally”
Just a writing tip: separate your points into distinct sections.
Your point makes sense, but reads better when broken up into distinct paragraphs or thoughts.
It’s already separated into two paragraphs, separating both points I’m making.
Certainly is after your edits. Thanks.
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I didn’t split it in two as an edit, it was split from the get go…
Edit: I looked again and the only difference is that I added “proportionally”